Wish to write gross sales emails like a professional?
Kristina and Will take a look at widespread e mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them to be able to study what to do in a different way.
Be a part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Progress Advertising at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.
Will is flying solo immediately as a result of Kristina caught COVID-19 however is effectively sufficient (fortunately!) that she’s in a position to submit her rewrite. Lets take a look at this week’s e mail and get insights on why emails that don’t look good on cellular and that begins with a query mark don’t carry out effectively.
Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails beneath! 👇
How’s this look on cellular?
Topic line: Kristina – name this week?
Hello Kristina,
Was doing a little analysis and primarily based in your function because the Director of Progress Advertising at Interseller , figured you’d be one of the best particular person to talk with about Tech Partnerships and Integrations. My firm is the primary Integration Market as a Service, so for context, we allow Enterprise to Enterprise SaaS firms to construct and enter in-app marketplaces.
Since tech partnerships at the moment are important for progress, my firm allows Saas firms, corresponding to like firm and like firm, to shortly lower the time to worth for his or her these partnerships and monitor the combination’s constructive influence on buyer retention and satisfaction.
When do you might have quarter-hour on Friday or Monday to talk about our service?
Finest,
Rep
Will’s Rewrite
Topic line: Integration Subject
Hello Kristina,
I do know Greenhouse has a whole lot of companions already, so I wished to ask…
Have you ever seen any offers stalled due to a lacking integration?
Progress leaders sometimes vent. Integrations can restrict progress.
Purchasers need a seamless expertise, so integrations change into a should have. Good luck making the case to engineering.
We make this simple to your staff. One API will get you entry to a whole lot of firms.
Curious if that is widespread.
Will
Kristina’s Rewrite
Topic line: integration market
Kristina,
Observed Greenhouse has over 400 pre-built integrations listed on the location – spectacular!
Whereas it’s nice to have this seen for prospects, present prospects might be lacking out as their tech stacks evolve.
We’re serving to firms like like firm and like firm create constructive buyer experiences with our in-app market for integrations.
Concerned with exploring this to your customer-base?
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