Wish to write gross sales emails like a professional?
Kristina and Will take a look at widespread electronic mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them so to study what to do otherwise.
Be a part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Development Advertising at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.
Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails beneath! 👇
Associated: Wrestle with InMail? Right here’s What 28.3M Emails Can Educate You. 📚
The Unhappy State of InMail
Topic: AI/ML and Massive Knowledge Tech Workforce At COMPANY
I hope you might be doing effectively.
I’m writing to you to discover alternatives for our corporations to work collectively.
Over time, we now have constructed strong capabilities within the space of Massive knowledge and AI/ML. We work as an offshore supply middle for various US-based tech corporations. This engagement offers our purchasers substantial price benefit and entry to a tech crew that works 24/7.
COMPANY India Restricted is a publicly listed firm on India’s largest inventory change, Nationwide Inventory Change (NSE), having a crew of 350+ builders and designers and 30+ international purchasers with our Places of work within the USA, India & East Africa
Our crew is predicated out of US. Would it not be potential to satisfy you over a cup of espresso someday within the subsequent few days and share our worth proposition?
Regards,
Rep Rep Rep
Advertising Affiliate
COMPANY
www.COMPANY.com
Right here’s what your reader sees
Desktop view
Cell view
Take 1: Personalization Sandwich 🥪 (29 phrases)
Topic: Your E-newsletter
Will, in your weekly electronic mail you talked about hiring for AI.
Doesn’t appear to be you’ve crammed the function. Have you ever thought of non-US expertise for the place?
Love what you’re constructing.
Take 2: Double Statement (43 phrases)
Topic: Lavender Product Query
Will – trying out Lavender’s product. Looks as if the info it generates is driving numerous your content material.
I’d guess Eng is strapped to give attention to roadmap. Any ideas on a component time AI crew to assist unearth nuggets on your content material technique?
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