Need to write gross sales emails like a professional?
Kristina and Will take a look at frequent electronic mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them to be able to be taught what to do in another way.
Be part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Development Advertising at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.
Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails under! 👇
E mail
Will,
I wished to comply with up on my final electronic mail.
Our retention price working with firms like yours is 87% after 2 months as a result of we preserve bringing them new prospects.
Our electronic mail tech + your killer provide, despatched 100s of occasions a day to focused lead lists – you’ll constantly generate leads.
Merely put – what we do, works.
As a result of we’re particularly on the lookout for knowledge, analytics and software program firms much like you, we solely have 5 spots out there in your business.
Would you be open to debate the above over a fast 15-minute name?
Observe Up 1: BAR Your Case Examine
Will, are you accustomed to _____?
Once we met them, they gave the impression to be at an identical stage. Most leads got here by their PLG movement.
We bolted onto their outbound staff. Particularly, we targeted on serving to scale up their particular person person base.
Consequently, their staff needed to 2x to handle the certified inbound. Month-to-month MRR development has 2x’d.
Has your staff executed any outbound for this but?
Observe Up 2: Considerate Bump
Hey Will, did you catch my notice?
I reached out as a result of we’ve been having lots of success working with PLG pushed firms.
If outsourcing a few of your outbound isn’t a precedence, simply let me know. Completely satisfied to share a few of what we’ve seen working.
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