Need to write gross sales emails like a professional?
Kristina and Will have a look at frequent electronic mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them in an effort to be taught what to do in a different way.
Be part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Progress Advertising and marketing at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.
Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails beneath! 👇
Topic: Your new POC (Firm)
Hello Will,
Comfortable Halloween! Know you’ve been engaged with Your Contact since early Summer time,however right now was Your’s final day with Firm. Reaching out with a pleasant “hiya” as I’ll be your new level of contact shifting ahead!
Thought to shoot you an invitation to Firm’s Activate Tour NYC coming November ninth from 4-8 pm! It’d be nice to satisfy you in individual because it’ll be an superior night time to attach with fellow entrepreneurs, Firm execs, and Firm prospects in NYC. Would love so that you can pop by and community with fellow leaders throughout the trade!
Congratulations in your continued success and hopefully I’ll see you there!
Kindly,
Take 1
Topic: NYC Wednesday?
Will –
We’re internet hosting an occasion for advertising and marketing leaders this Wednesday. Can I rely you in?
We’re getting a few of our prime Firm prospects in NYC collectively. Thought you’d take pleasure in.
I do know your cofounders are based mostly in NYC. Noticed your location set to Atlanta, however I wasn’t positive should you’d be round.
Will
Ps. It’s been a minute because you final caught up along with your account supervisor Niki. She’s since left, so just a little heads up I’ll be your new level of contact.
Take 2
Topic:
Firm | bandwidth | NYC
Hey Will,
You final related with us in June. It didn’t appear you had time to give attention to implementing Firm then.
Given the posts on hiring, I used to be curious if issues have modified.
Will
Ps. Know you and your cofounders have been touring. You in NYC on Wednesday? We’re getting just a few advertising and marketing leaders collectively for dinner & drinks.
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